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Hi!
Congratulations for the quick updates, it's really pleasant for readers! Your story develops nicely, I really like the way you depict Severus. I mean, just because he was sorted in Gryffindor doesn't make him different. I think the people he will hang with will shape him, whether they are Gryffindor or Slytherin. The way he already feels the conflict between the 2 Houses is interesting : both houses have nice people (Narcissa, Lily), so he seems to evaluate them on their flaws (fanatics and people who underestimate him). That's really in character!
Last point : "Pathetic Pair. Dumshit Duo". I SO like Lockhart-style names!!

Hello!
I just red your story, and I wanted to congratulate you. It is very promising, I liked the characterization (especially Sirius). Besides, I had never read a Gryffindor!Snape before. Well, the idea is good, and I look forward to the next chapters. I wonder if there will be 4 or 5 marauders ; the presence of Sev has already had an impact on Sirius' personnality. Oooh, please, a happy end!!
Yamaelle

Hmm...is Peter going to change as well...with snape as a possible friend instead of always feeling underminded by Sirus and James?...'cause thats kinda the feeling i got about peter in book three "little lump of a boy always trailing after potter" kinda sounds like he was just the annoying person they didn't dislke but didn't really care for either.

Interesting start. Hope you update soon so I can see what will happen next.

Interesting start.