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for Dear Lily *COMPLETE*

by Rumpelyssa

person DeeDee
schedule November 6, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Well I guess Hermione is a werewolf now. Now we get another rescue, hopefully before he has his wicked way with Hermione. Will Severus be able to cope with a werewolf mate? Can
person lisa
schedule November 6, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Aww man! that Fenrir ruined a special moment and attacked Hermione and now he's ruined her life. Poor Severus. at least though Harry now accepts Severus. It was a good chappie all except Fenrir showing up and ruining things. but love it anyways. Nope it is not ruined at all. and Yes indeed I got your email and love the piccies. thanks again. more more more please. Update soon please.
person pittwitch
schedule November 6, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Not put off at all! Can't wait to see how Snape saves the day!
person pittwitch
schedule November 6, 2006 at 12:00 AM
OK, you made me re-read. I apologize. I was projecting my own image of things Snape-y on your character. Please don't hex me! PW
person cateye
schedule November 6, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I can't believe i forgot to readthis story,I mean I think i read the first chapter and than something came up and I forgot about it.But this is by far one of your best[and i'm not just saying that because i so love Severus]I realy think we will find out in the book that Severus and Lilly where at least best friends if not more.I've read alot of fourms where alot of people don't see the Severus/Lilly thing,but if you read between the lines it's there.I thought the last chapter was well writen and thought out. can't wait for more!
person pittwitch
schedule November 5, 2006 at 12:00 AM
You had me all the way until the more personal interaction with Harry. I can't specify, but he just doesn't seem as Snape-ish all of a sudden. He came back with the little discourse with Bellatrix. Still very interesting story. Will be waiting for more! Thanks for the entertainment. PW
person lisa
schedule November 5, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Yay!!! Hermione is safe and home. and I love how Harry did the impression. And perhaps they will have a new found friendship. one can only hope. and lol Bellatrix running was funny. I'd be spooked too though. Awesome chappie Bella. thnaks again. and I love Severus cat form Ebonium. Nice name. more please Update again soon please.
person Anon
schedule November 5, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Excellent chapter, the werewolf was totally unexpected.
I hope the others will not give SS and HG a hard time when they get together. Professor Lupine could be upset if he thinks Severus was lusting after Hermione in school. Or maybe he turns out to be in love with Hermione also. Can
person Dee Dee
schedule November 5, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Excellent chapter, the werewolf was totally unexpected.
I hope the others will not give SS and HG a hard time when they get together. Professor Lupine could be upset if he thinks Severus was lusting after Hermione in school. Or maybe he turns out to be in love with Hermione also. Can
person lisa
schedule November 4, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Yay!!!! Thanks again Bella. I know you have alot of other stories going on so it is appreciated. and Poor Hermione. It's all a big mess. I hope Severus rescues her soon. can't wait to find out.thanks again for the update.