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for Dear Lily *COMPLETE*

by Rumpelyssa

person lisa
schedule November 9, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I think it is nice Harry has forgiven Severus and they are getting along so well. I think Lilly would be proud. If he wasn't so stubborn and just tell her he loved her and gather his courage he'd realize she loved him too. And ohh dear god please tell me Hermione wakes up and stops him.I love Severus and dont want him to die yet. more more more please Update soon please.
person beeky63
schedule November 9, 2006 at 12:00 AM
NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO! Damn evil cliff hangers. And damn Severus for being so stubborn about his feelings for Hermione. Can't wait for the next installment tomorrow. Thank you for that. Keep up the good work. Toodles. Now I'm off to read the next chapter of My Fair Witch lol.
person cateye
schedule November 9, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I know you wouln't let anything happen to our dear Severus,so don't let him even think about killing himself,even though he might not realize it now he has alot of people to live for. Your right about Tonks being strong,you threw me with that chapter[witch is what a good writer does!]I think Severus is a farther figure to everyone of the students in one way or another,even when hes being snarky it's because he cares about what happens to them.And he has always watched over Harry especially,don't care what anyone says hes not all bad!As for Ron the---Wish we could find a big pot to bowl him in and get it over with.
person sheedy
schedule November 8, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I'm greedy so of course I say all at once. LOL
person cateye
schedule November 8, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I want to say no so I can have something new to read each day,but I have to have it all now! please!
person beeky63
schedule November 8, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Hi there hon, sorry about the lack of reviews but real life kept interfering, jeesh! Anyway I really like this story but damn it! how is Hermione going to recover from everything that Fenir put her through? Please update once a day because I wouldn't be able to keep up otherwise, damn real life again. LOL. Toodles.
person cateye
schedule November 8, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I was wondering about Tonks not saying"wothcer "when Severus met her on the streetshe always uses the greeting.Could someone had kidnaped her and done a polyjuice because she got better quick?And of Course our Severus would figure it out about Minerva,can'twait to see who it is.
person cateye
schedule November 7, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I love how your haveing Severus&Harry work togeather in this story.Thay really are alot alike,inbook 5or6 Hermione even tried geeting Harry to see that.I like how Severus is in this story to,a nice change,I hope Thay can get Hermione out,poor Severus he needs her so much.Can't wait for more.
person lisa
schedule November 7, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Wow. I cant believe it Hermione's under his power and didnt go back with Remus. and Minerva is something else too. I am I dont know kinda speechless.and dont worry I wont flame you. I like Harry too. I love all the wonderful characters. Just some are yummier than others lol. *wink* Please update soon.
person Dee Dee
schedule November 7, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Wow now I know what you meant. The werewolf not only had sex with her but has power over her.
But I wonder, if his power is form her willingness to follow the rules maybe she can get away. After all, like professor Snape was fond of saying, the golden trio does not think the rules apply to them. A girl that breaks curfew, goes to forbidden places in the castle, lures the headmistress be attacked by centaurs, and sets a professor on fire is not a blind rule follower. I think Severus is the man to remind Hermione of her rebellious side, and take her away form her