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for Dear Lily *COMPLETE*

by Rumpelyssa

schedule November 25, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Oh, I love this. How original and I love getting into Snapes head...such a busy place to be. Can't wait to see where you go with this. p
schedule November 25, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Draco can't possibly be that stupid. Did he think that LV brought deatheaters as a welcoming party or that he was threatening Hermione for not turning them in because LV really, really missed them? SS has his work cut out for him and now HP is being an idiot too, which is not all that foreign a behavior for him. ;)
Love this story so far. p
person Anon
schedule August 21, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
person Dixie50
schedule February 23, 2007 at 12:00 AM
very nice ending. I enjoyed the story. Please keep writing.
person Dixie50
schedule February 22, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 19
Suggested English correction...
I was supposed to have had her last night, those breasts, that mind, her body, is mine Greyback! I
person Dixie50
schedule February 22, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 20

It made me cry to read Molly's reaction to hearing about Ron's death.
person Dixie50
schedule February 22, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Ch 7
I dont think Severus is a dirty old man.
Ron is far too bumb for Hermione
She likes a challenge.
person Dixie50
schedule February 22, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 8. aaah Severus the Kitty Cat Animagus
How cute is that
Impetuous Malfoy.. just as stupid as Harry Potter
person Dixie50
schedule February 22, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 9
I rather enjoyed the Bed and Breakfast and the conversation about Alice Cooper. Well done.
person Dixie50
schedule February 22, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 9 ? Escape from Bella was well thought out. I wondered how they would do it.
I really loved it.