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This story is absolutely amazing and definitely one of my favorite harry potter fics to date. I am so happy that you didn't include the hocruxes...getting slightly tired of everyone using it. I love your creativity with the defeat of Voldemort and also with the time warp. Consequently every time you wrote that (and including the time I just wrote it now) I had The Time Warp from the Rocky Horror Picture Show playing in my mind. That really has to be the most creative thing I have ever read in a fic. It was absolutely amazing. This whole story was just...I don't even have words to describe how insanely spectacular it was. You are truly a talented writer and I am so happy I read this story. It was more amazing than I could have ever expected.

The story isn't bad, but you do need a beta reader. 20% of Coca Cola would be WAY more than 2.7 billion, there is only one Outback Steakhouse in London and that is near Heathrow, and you misuse quite a few larger words. I'm enjoying the story, but things like that can really jar you out of the world you have created.

How refreshing, a story that portrays Harry as a young adult trying to solve some of the mystry surrounding his life. I feared a story about a whinny, sniveling, tantrum throwing brat. I have just finished ch. 1 and am very impressed with your skill. WRITR-ON!!!

that was the most beautifull story I have ever read!!! Brilliant.... I thank you for your story it was refreshing!

OMG I really think that I'm going to cry from the last line of this story. It was done so wonderfully. I really enjoyed the entire piece. Thank you for writing it. I sat down and read it from beginning to end in less then a day. I really loved it. I know I've already said that, but hey it bears repeating.

it has taken me a week to read this story, but i'm glad i did. it was something else, yet i enjoyed it immensley. i did not see half of that coming, and at this point i thought i had seen pretty much all HP had to offer. you have obviously worked hard on this fic and have done a good job. excellent work!

This is a wonderful Story! Thanks for writing!

I must say, that in the 2+ years I've been visiting this site, I usually have kept to single chapter, PWP-type stories...just to break up the cookie-cutter mold stories I mostly read over at FanFiction.net and FictionAlley. I never expected a novel-length fic from here to be any good, and I'm glad that you've proven me wrong. While the writing isn't perfect, and I think the sex scenes (especially Harry's dialoge durring them) were sometimes awkward, you have to date the best evil-Dumbledore fic I've ever read, which for some reason has become a favorite subcategory of mine. I've read many before that start off strong, but either are given up, or turn out horribly awful. Yours is neither, and I thank you. I hope to include this fic the next time I update my ULTIMATE HP FANFICTION GUIDE, and I plan to give your fic high marks. Not so much for the writing (which could use some work, but is still very acceptable), but definitely for the plot.

Ross

Love how you contiue updating the story. Harry should have disembowled Ernie for what he did. I know i would want to hurt someone if they did that to my girlfriend. Contiue the good work.

Good story. Never thought Dumbles as a bad guy, but you made him hateable. I figured Ginny in the end, but you don't seam like a cannon type person. Again great read. look forward to more.