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February 5, 2016 at 12:00 AM
Your formatting for the second chapter is messed up. There are sooooo many grammar mistakes, like random "f" and "g" being inserted into words. Fix it, it's very difficult to read otherwise.
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September 27, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Nice story? Is an update coming out?
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September 12, 2007 at 12:00 AM
You have to continue this story. Its fantastic!
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January 6, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Please continue this story! It has an interesting and original plot and is very well written! :)
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November 4, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I, too, am completely in favor of seeing this story continued. It's very well written!
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September 21, 2006 at 12:00 AM
that was great!! cont. the story
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August 21, 2006 at 12:00 AM
continue this story, it is great, the emotions are very realistic. i like the plot and it is very exciting. please continue it!!! :)
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August 7, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Much better than the summary led me to believe :). Good work!
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July 31, 2006 at 12:00 AM
lmao. she is the queen of manipulation. update soon!
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July 27, 2006 at 12:00 AM
The Tonk's story was good and all...Harry with an older women...hott idea, but i'm all for you continuing this one!! please?