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Spitzenm

Haha this is such a good idea for a fic! I have a thought who Harry's crush is ;D Please post another chapter soon, the first one was great!

Insults....*thinks* Well, there alway's my all time favorites: Shit for Brains and Douche-y McFuck-face (don't ask where that one came from O.O) Anyway, I like the story. Can't wait for the next chapter ^-^


So Devious~<3

Very good, so far.

If you need any help with translating or need a beta, I speak German and English fluently. I was raised with both, so if you need help with anything just ask. I know how hard it is to write in a language you don't know as well and you often get stuck on words, you know them in one language but not the other. Happens to me all the time. It's a real pain.

Also, wenn du irgendwas brauchst, dann kannst du mir eine e-mail schicken, macht mir nichts aus. Aber mein Deutsch ist auch nicht perfect.

Can't wait for another chapter!

OMG!! You so have to update like NOW!!! I need to know what's gonna happen next!! Anyway, now that I've ranted....just wanted to say nice work and keep it up.

Gillian aka Moonlitorion

I'm not a native English speaker either, so I'm a pretty crappy judge on this whole "proper language" matter. I dare say your English is pretty decent, and even though it's a little bit clumsy at times it's totally understandable through out. It's funny how your own language kinda shines through at places, especially in the thoughts of our beloved rivals'.

All in all, the story is good as well as your spelling and grammar. Though you might wanna consider getting a beta for yourself, just to get rid of the slight clumsiness.

Good job nontheless!