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by ZooArmy

person claire
schedule July 28, 2006 at 12:00 AM
excellent! keep writing plz?
person jess
schedule July 28, 2006 at 12:00 AM
made it.
nice story
person Madamdragon(not signed in)
schedule July 27, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I made it that far! Loved it btw! Update fast please...does harry like draco?...i cant tell im a lil out of it today, but hurry and put some juicy-ness in it please I cant wait! Hurry up i cant wait...*whines*
schedule July 27, 2006 at 12:00 AM
wow I liked the chapter and your ramblings made me laugh!!!!!!!!!!
person Isinuyasha
schedule July 27, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Ahhh...wei
person N/A
schedule July 27, 2006 at 12:00 AM
good story...keep up the good work
person Voodoo
schedule July 27, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Weee awesome story, and you have no reason to complain about your English, its better than alot of peoples! lol. Pleeease write more, this story is great, like the way you have both Harrys thoughts and Dracos thoughts mixed in with the way they`re speaking!
person ningchan
schedule July 27, 2006 at 12:00 AM
wanker, bastard, cock, twat, tit(to call someone)
bollocks (literally balls or damn)
bugger (literally sex up the arse or again, damn)
bloody hell
poof (literally gay)
*grins* hope these words help out a bit *grins*
keep it up dude!
ning
person zelda
schedule July 26, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Such a nice story!Please,keep going with it
person Isinuyasha
schedule July 26, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Hey! Gef