rate_review Reviews

I LOVE this story. Have I said it before? I must have. Really, I've read hundreds of great H/D-fics and it's starting to get difficult to find the best of them but this is actually one of my favorites :D So please (omg i'm begging) add another chapter soon with more hot hxd-action! It was a good idea that Ron already knew about Draco (thanks to Hermione) because the SHOCKOMGICAN'TBELIEVEIT-part appears in almost every other fic nowadays :D And yeah, I don't understand why Pansy has to be the ugly slut ^_^

OOOO I want to know what Hermiones plan is. Funny chapter I enjoyed Rons comic relife.
I cant wait for the next chapter so plz update soon

I don't review every chapter, but after reading six chapters.. I feel like leaving my first review for this story now. =) Overall, I think it's a nice plot and interesting enough to keep me coming back for more.
A few points however. In Harry's thoughts, why does he keep referring to himself as "Potter"? It's confusing at times, because the only canon character that really calls him by his last name is Draco, so it seems like Draco is talking to him, not Harry's own inner voice.
When there are conversations with the trio of Harry/Hermione/Ron there are only sentence after sentence with quotations, and nothing specifc on exactly who is saying what sentence. Sometimes I'm not sure who of the trio is speaking. Again, just another confusion but nothing too bad.
Breaks in between the story are a bit distracting like the "... Cliff-hanger... just kidding.." part, I don't see why it was necessary. This is a fan fic, and when your readers get into the story, it's like escaping into another world. But to have these sudden breaks of author's notes distracts the flow in the story. Again, like the "(note: Read ch01

hi noch ne deutsche :-)
Ich find die Story klasse und ich freu mich schon auf die zwei Pl

This chapter was a bit hard for me to read. could be coz it's 4:22 in the morning, but I had to work my way down the page. Usually your chapters read very easily. Otherwise, I liked it and I'm looking forward to the next chapter.

that was amazing i cabt wait for the next chap

your story is the best one i've read in awhile!
keep it up!

I've read all your five chapters now and thought I should leave a review, because we all like getting reviews :)
Anyway, I've been enjoying your story, Draco is so cute. Keep writting, and have a nice holiday!

I love it. I LOVE it!

It's so rare that you find a HPDM fanfiction that has SUBSTANCE.... So often they're just smut, smut, smut! It's nice. I love your progression of events and (ESPECIALLY) the amount that Pansy is in this fic-- I *loves* her. I'm actually believing that Draco and Pansy aren't bastards, which is a new thing for me-- even though I always knew they were nifty, nifty little fiends.

Keep it up, I can't wait for the next installment!

Oh-- and I'm in contact with Jo Rowling, she's VERY amused by your comments.

~Adrian

Ooooohhhhh!!!! Sooooo good!!! Can't wait for more, please update soon!
Later//LoveGD