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August 30, 2006 at 12:00 AM
You were supposed to update tonght! Damn eyboard stll won't wor! Grrr. Can't wrte rght. Please update! Don't mae me yell at you tomorrow! You have the chapters just update!
All my love
Sam :p
All my love
Sam :p
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August 26, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I love your fic and please take as long as you need.
:)
:)
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August 25, 2006 at 12:00 AM
good chapter, bye
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August 25, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Wow. A lot of errors. Oh well. Ths revew would be better but my a few eys aren't dong anythng. Grrr. Would have been longer but have to fx the problem...
Update soon!
Sam
Update soon!
Sam
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August 25, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Not to be rude or anything,I'm not sure if English is your second language or you were just in a hurry, but you really need to get a beta. If you have one then you need to get rid of them and get someone who can spell. I have been reading your story and I am really enjoying it, but in the last chapter there were so many glaring spelling errors that I couldn't even finish the chapter because it was so distracting.
Examples: caught spelled cought, looked spelled loooked and many more. Sorry if this seems harsh, but I think some form of grammar will make the story better and easier to read. Thanks.
Examples: caught spelled cought, looked spelled loooked and many more. Sorry if this seems harsh, but I think some form of grammar will make the story better and easier to read. Thanks.
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August 24, 2006 at 12:00 AM
WRITE MORE! I LOVE THIS STORY!
and Draco shoudl be his friend NOT his brother
and Draco shoudl be his friend NOT his brother
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August 24, 2006 at 12:00 AM
hey
this is a relly good story and it's alright to take your time.anyone who dosen't think so is has their head up their ass and don't know shite. I know how that feels my BF's dad did the same when I was 14.It frighting and just hurts so much.but it helps to talk and will get better in time. hope you'r okay.
this is a relly good story and it's alright to take your time.anyone who dosen't think so is has their head up their ass and don't know shite. I know how that feels my BF's dad did the same when I was 14.It frighting and just hurts so much.but it helps to talk and will get better in time. hope you'r okay.
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August 20, 2006 at 12:00 AM
His brother? I think his friendwould be better and easyer to write. But what about Her. and Ron? Will they turn it to assholes? or will they still be his friends? I love it sofar and i can not wait for the rest.
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August 20, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Well the stroy is off to a strnage but abet nice start with honesty. When you going to update? I would enjoy reading more.
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August 16, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Aeolua,
*HUG* I'm loving this story. I vote for Draco being his Brother. MWAHA. I am sorry to hear that yet another person has had to deal with being sexually harassed. It is unpleasent to say the least. (I know all too well) *HUG* And I saw a note about a betta reader? I'll betta for you if you betta for me!!!
All my love (except for that which is reserved for my soon to be husband),
AdenDiction
-!-Addiction-!-
*HUG* I'm loving this story. I vote for Draco being his Brother. MWAHA. I am sorry to hear that yet another person has had to deal with being sexually harassed. It is unpleasent to say the least. (I know all too well) *HUG* And I saw a note about a betta reader? I'll betta for you if you betta for me!!!
All my love (except for that which is reserved for my soon to be husband),
AdenDiction
-!-Addiction-!-