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for The Lost Rose

by Aeolua

person momoko
schedule September 10, 2006 at 12:00 AM
good chapter
person Speed Reader
schedule September 9, 2006 at 12:00 AM
-Twitch- Darling? Well at least you updated. -sigh- How's your truch? (cey won't worc still) Hopefully you'll update soon (and have your truch fixed). i just can't get over it...sry. Loved Ron dying! Cill again soon!

Your "Darling" muse
Sam
person Stephanie
schedule September 9, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Damn...I LOVED that last chapter...keep up the good wrok, girl!
person Hambares
schedule September 9, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Many thanx for not killing us with a cliffie. But the one you left us with is still quite evil. :P
person Echo
schedule September 8, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Vernon Dursley has got to be an idiot. Does he think that people, especially magical people, won't find out what he did? How is it Harry's fault that the Weasleys, excluding Ron, are dead? Even if deatheaters killed them to find or flush out Harry, it still wouldn't be his fault. So unless he picked up a wand and AKed them... he's not responsible for the actions of others. No idea where you find your muse ... maybe go read some fanfics by other authors or collaborate with another writer. Dream a nice HP dream? You might want to start by reworking the last chapter. I know that you were in a rush: that's why there are many typos. Interesting fic. Please update when you round up those muses.
person megara1
schedule September 5, 2006 at 12:00 AM
MY GOD!!!! ARE YOU ALRIGHT????? well of course you are not alright, my goodness to have your trust betrayed like that. you must be going through a shit of a time. it's rough and the good thing is that the main word was TRIED and he didn't DO. i hope everything well be okay hopefully youtook action against him or at least beat the shit out of him. my god always watch over you and grant many blessings.
Megara1
person megara1
schedule September 5, 2006 at 12:00 AM
sorry saw that chapter and freaked i haven't read in awhile. but you are doing a wonderful job. p.s. you have loyal readers who are willing to help and support you through rough times. and any fears.
person megara1
schedule September 5, 2006 at 12:00 AM
your ideas are your cure. throw them out onto paper and let it flow. don't try so hard. you just have to try different scenarios and see which works.
person Hambares
schedule September 4, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Good luck with the writer's block! I have no idea how to cuer it though!
person joanna
schedule September 4, 2006 at 12:00 AM
hi, i just read your story and i like it
i hope you do a other one
i can't waith to see what's
going to have been next time