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More, more, please. This is going a bit... smoother than some Harry-and-Severus bonding fictions so far, and I'm enjoying the tale. If you are one of the writers who have email update lists for their stories, please add me to your list. I hope your schedule and muse will allow you to write and post more chapters sometime soon. Keep up the good work. Zafaran {mailto:} zafaran {at} fastmail {dot} fm

please go on soon.
I really love the story! ^^

Love it.

This is good! I can't wait until Harry and Severus can interact more. Poor Severus...

A very interesting story and I can't wait to see what happens next. Wonderful work!!~Sophia

Why did you repost the story when there is no update?

I don;t know how long ago you began this piece, but it is a great read! I look forward to your next update!

this is really well written. it manages to escape the usual cliches abundant in most harry/snape bonding stories. in fact, i wasn't even prepared for the bonding part to come up. you managed to misdirect the reader which is getting increasingly hard to do in such a well picked arena of fan fiction. i love the conversations. they sound like the characters are really having these discussions where life is on the line. you've avoided the pitfalls of typical conversations between snape and remus. you've managed to keep them from becoming caricatures. i also appreciate how you give just enough information. it's not lacking nor is it boring. the pace is good and so is the characterization. i'm looking forward to more.

I'm enjoying this story very much. Snape's not OOC, Harry's still too noble for his own good. The pace isn't too fast (I really dislike stories that skip developing the plot to head right for the slash). Can't wait for the next chapter!

oo, this is dark and exciting. I am looking foward to more.

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