rate_review Reviews

I can't believe you ended it there! I hope you write soon! :)

I LOVE this! It's ****ing brilliant! Please please please update!

A truly novel take on the creature-fics universe. The characterizations are very well done and the narrative flows smoothly. I specially like how very well portrayed are Harry's emotions. At times, I can fell my heart ache in time with his, and in this last chapter I would have loved to shake some sense into several people, mainly Harry's so called friends, though it made for a refreshing reading for once to see Ron getting mad at Harry for *not* accepting Malfoy. I hope in the future you'll explain more in depth why everybody at Hogwarts reacted so badly to Harry's rejection of Malfoy, since it made for a very intense, useful and original plot tiwst.

I'm very glad to have come across this story and will look forward to more. Great job!

...................... YAY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

I don't mind cliffhangers... really... as long as you UPDATE QUICKLY! OK, now you know I'm frustrated, I'll get on with it: Finally, someone's working on a story where Harry doesn't just cave! I love creature fics and soul bond fics but there are times when Harry's portrayed as having no more backbone than, well, a limp noodle!

The concept is really good; I'd really like to see more of this story soon. Did I mention soon? Sorry. Back on track. I can really see Malfoy being such a jerk, actually. Typical spoilt-brat behaviour, make someone else get what he wants instead of working for it himself. Snape is well done, too, biased against Harry and favoring Malfoy, so he doesn't really care that it might not be something Harry wants. Harry is exactly what one expects of someone that had been abused as a child, physically and/or sexually, the panic attacks he experiences very well written. I can see him cutting his losses and running if they pressure him too much - that'd be interesting, seeing them searching all over the world for him - or maybe researching the legal ramifications for himself and tying everyone up in red tape, which would probably be even more interesting. Imagine Malfoy trying to court Harry with a Ministry appointed chaperone! Anyway, overall very good characterizations.

The slight mystery behind Harry's behaviour is well-done, too. You know there must be something really bad in his past that probably had something to do with the Dursleys, but really the only thing known for sure is that he can't stand people touching him; and that he's managed to hide it this long. Will there be a big shocking revelation? Who will end up knowing what? It's all very exciting in a tense, "when will know?" kind of way.

Good sentence structure; no blindingly bad spelling mistakes and actually read-able (which, considering the level of schooling most kids are getting is actually novel... kind of scary, huh?); your ideas and the story line flow from one to the next without the sense that someone has cut and paste the story all over the place. Two thumbs up!

Anyway, now that I've blabbed enough... good luck writing in the future, and update soon please! (Pretty Please?)

hey this sounds like a great story i hope you update gain soon

great story! can't wait until the next chapter!

Please update soon. I already love this story. My guess is that Harry was molested (even raped) as a child, and Draco is a wampire. I hope I will find out soon. See ya

I do like the conccept sso far, you desscribed Harry'ss paranoia very well. I do hope though that it will not be non con the whole time...the lasst time I read one like that I sstopped reading it becausse it wass jusst rape, very dissturbing. I'll continue reading if you continue writing.

I like this story so far. It being in first person gives a different feel to the story.