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for Inevitability

by skydreamer22

person frozenrose
schedule September 10, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Hi! Your story is sooo full of ANGST! I love it yet at the same time I feel so incredibly bad for Harry. I hope things perk up for him in the future.
person Kyriss
schedule September 7, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Wow... powerful. When will the next installment be??
person Lady Jueglerr
schedule September 5, 2006 at 12:00 AM
*Frantically Sobs*

POOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOORRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRR Harry!
person jolene
schedule September 5, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I love the way Harry is fighting. I hope you are going to update soon, I'm on pins and needleds as to whether Harry goes ahead and gives in.
person Dawn
schedule August 30, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I'm intrigued. I love the idea of Ron and Hermione being on Draco's side but not sure why they'd go to such extremes without talking to Harry about why he should accept. Draco seems to be a total prat in this, much as in canon really, - would he not be trying to convince Harry to accept him rather than bludger him into it though? interested to see what happens next - will everyone love Harry again once he does what they want? Your Harry seems to be canny but when will he get a clue and tell them all to go to hell and disappear for good (I think he'd run away given the way you've written him a slight chance of getting away without getting caught and this scenario).
I'm presuming Harry's been either abused or raped in this story - from his reactions to being touched - hope that you're not going to make it good for him and not all non-con, he seems so sad and in need of love and caring.
person lonelyreverance
schedule August 23, 2006 at 12:00 AM
as broken as you have made harry after reading both your hp fics you shattered and surpassed all my expectations for the hp fandom! I don't know if I can beg prettily enough for you to update sooner but if I can just give me a ring and I shall abase myself at your feet!
person tellnoone_noonetells
schedule August 20, 2006 at 12:00 AM
wow... That was just...wow... You wrote thatso beautifuly... How can such a twisted story have a beautiful feel to it... I love angst storys, and mate stories, but this story.... it takes the cake... You are just to good at this... My heart feels kinda tight from reading this, but in a good way! I hope you update soon! I cant wait to see how Draco will react.
~T.N.O.N.O.T.~
person ParalyticDawnfire
schedule August 20, 2006 at 12:00 AM
This is like a quote I read on deviantART once (yes, I saved it):

"...I wanted to believe as I watched your world crumble in your hands, I wanted to believe as you raised a glass to your last stand, I wanted to believe you would win... the war in your head that I did not understand..."
-Farean

There are so many signs he gives out, signs seen through his 'facade'. But I guess only another victim would see it, unless you're in the person's head, like we readers are. And then the other victims wouldn't say anything, because they'd be just as afraid.

What will the planet do when they discover his secret? How will he survive being Draco's mate? Update soon, please!
person Dragon
schedule August 20, 2006 at 12:00 AM
One of the most original fics I've read about HP/DM being mates. Keep up the good work. I'll be watching you!

Jeez, that didn't sound creepy at all. *sarcasm*

Hugs!
person Dominic
schedule August 20, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Yesss. Updates for me. I have come to the conclusion that you are writing this story for me. It has to be the only explanation. It's too perfect to be otherwise. I LOVE you! Would you bear my children? Pretty please?