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for Inevitability

by skydreamer22

person madlodger
schedule October 27, 2006 at 12:00 AM
CHAPTER 4
Hi, skydreamer22. I like Inevitability a lot. I love creature-bond type of fic, the possibilities for the plot development are endless. You have a very interesting approach. I like how much Harry's character is developed, it is so angsty and dark. And the fact that he is a loner with phobias is incredibly realistic. Very good dialog. I can't wait to see where you'll take this cool story.

Thank you for writing, skydreamer22 , will be checking for updates on this one.
person Moyima
schedule October 16, 2006 at 12:00 AM
WOW. This is fantastic. A total twist from what we usually see in creature fics! Great job! Please write more!
person celestialuna
schedule October 8, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Good start of story! poor harry.
person celestialuna
schedule October 8, 2006 at 12:00 AM
OMG Draco is a vampire, he has to be.
person celestialuna
schedule October 8, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I really hope Harry turns his back on them later! love this story!
person celestialuna
schedule October 8, 2006 at 12:00 AM
God, can Harry suffer anymore! update please, this story is probably one of the best I've read lately, but it still pisses me off.
person purrfus
schedule October 7, 2006 at 12:00 AM
#5 / ch 4 - followed the info from your SmallVille Clex. This is dark. Could you make it darker and have someone give Dumbledore and Ron and a few other people what they have coming to them? Mostly Dumbledore because I have never liked that character and your story dosn't change that, but also Ron because of his behavior in your story.

Thanks for writing and sharing.
person angelstarfire
schedule October 5, 2006 at 12:00 AM
NOOOO! I'm going to make an incredably sad face in a moment... This is awesome. It's not all the fluffy shyte you normally read with creature fics, and I love it! :D The crowd demands more!
person Anyanka
schedule October 4, 2006 at 12:00 AM
This story is just too good
person BirdieBlythe
schedule October 3, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Plwease update soon, yeah?!