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for this is what we are fighting for?

by blakmagevamp

person Dragonero
schedule October 13, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Oh, oh, oh!!! What a turn of events! Will harry get away from snape? Will they be bound? What are snape
person Ashley
schedule October 13, 2006 at 12:00 AM
wonderful story, can't wait for the next chapter
person Lee
schedule October 11, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Interesting Story

But whatever you meant with the german words you used will forever puzzle me and I am a native speaker. A nice translation would be great. Thanks.

Other than that I really do find the story intriguing and hope that you do continue your work.
schedule October 11, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I love it.

Btw what does that phrase in German mean?

Keep up the awesome work, coolsa.
person Katharos
schedule October 10, 2006 at 12:00 AM
That was great, but how did Malfoy talk Severus into going to someplace muggle and are you really going to make Severus a vampire or did he just bite Harry for the sadistic pleasure it brings?
person alegra
schedule August 1, 2006 at 12:00 AM
great story, i like it. but your german is not really good, i think. you have mistakes in it. "Doch nur eine Hure" is the right sentence, but i don`t know what you meant with "schoin".
carpe noctem alegra
person Sophia
schedule August 1, 2006 at 12:00 AM
A very wonderful and dark chapter. I like how Snape is finding out more about Harry and what he went through. I can't wait to see what happens next. Keep up the marvelous work.~Sophia
person Ginger
schedule July 23, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I think I know, why J.K.R. left drinking and smoking out of her books, with harry as example for kids etc., but as this is a side for people over 18 I think the idea is interesting and the story is well written. I would like to see a second chapter!!!
person Fantasy
schedule July 23, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Quite charming... I'm looking forward to reading more of it, since I utterly enjoyed reading it. :)
person Sophia
schedule July 22, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I really like what I've read so far and I can't wait to read more. I like the little bit of humor you threw in with Snape and Sirius, lol. It's unusual that Harry destroys Voldemort when he's fifteen instead of sixteen or older; I very much like this change. Keep up the very good work.~Sophia