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for The Morning After

by Queeny

schedule November 2, 2006 at 12:00 AM
God, that was good thanks for the update I hope to see more soon please!
person Cat
schedule November 2, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I loved this chapter, I love this story please continue!
person prettydelial
schedule November 2, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I think you're doing a really good job with this story. Hermione's reactions in the last chapter are very realistic. I don't know if I'm going to continue to read this story, because it is a little too dark for my tastes (you warned us: all my fault), but you write it very well and believably.
person Joani
schedule November 2, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I loved the update! ~Joani
person Citten
schedule November 2, 2006 at 12:00 AM
first you can't just leave us there it's....mean!!!! second that was a great chapter and you got the feeling really well to real life and most of all you did not have her running off and not getting the situation resovled (well maybe we will see the results in the next chapter-don't skip!) and that severus is human and also that his past has made him the way he is and i do hope that things will come out now. just so you know i have no problem with the characters being out-of-character -k- i do hope you update soon, really soon!:)
person Dragonero
schedule October 21, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Ah, that chapter was really absolutely great! I really love your story and the way hermione fights back against such a possessive snape! I wonder if he really will let her go in the end or if he will try to make her stay!!!
person Brian Darksoul
schedule October 18, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Holy SHIT!
I knew Moine was a bit iffy?
But man she is one sick little puppy.
Well Severus has my sympathies in this one.
Remembrer Moine your HIS little pet slut and NOONE elses.

Damn this has been an erotic story sofar I read upto chapter 12
Enjoyed parts of it too.
person slinkygurl
schedule October 16, 2006 at 12:00 AM
This is such a great story! Please keep updating it cause I can't wait to see what's going to happen next!
person Shanastay
schedule October 15, 2006 at 12:00 AM
person Anna_Karenina
schedule October 15, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Well, it would have been nice if you had set the proper warnings(Mdom). I