rate_review Reviews

RE: chapter nineteen

It is my belief that the old crazy lady is his mother. I thought that she had died. Interesting plot twist.
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Well done--keep up the good work!

PLEASE update this story! I just reread the entire thing and I really want it to be updated. Please please PLEASE do!
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suzz

I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?

you realy need to update this story you do a great job but you need more frequent updates

o come on and update

o come on already dont let me down i love your story please update

hi can you update soon i loved it so much i cant wait till you do the next one

I finally got caught up on all the chapters. Still loving the story. Wondering if you are going to follow canon through until the end. Guess I'll just have to wait and see. I kinda hope not. I hate what happened to Severus at the end of Book 7. I'd love to see him get his life back and find some happiness. Even if true happiness isn't really Snape-like. If you ever have need for a beta again I'd love to do it. I do some beta reading currently, but neither story I'm helping with gets updated very often, so it never takes much time. Anyway, good job! This story just keeps getting better.

I am so glad that you updated. I love reading this story! I can't wait to see what happens. Please update soon.

First I'll say that I really like this story so far. The writing just keeps getting better and better. However, I have to say I'm not sure how I'm going to do as it gets darker. I'm having a hard time with Snape whipping her and leaving welts. I can deal with some BDSM, for example, the spanking was awesome. Have to say that was good. The beating with the whip was a bit too dark for me and then having her like it. Gives me the creeps. Can't imagine Hermione getting off on that severe of a whipping. If it had been me, Snape would have woke up in the morning next to Lorena Bobbit and he'd be missing some private parts. Otherwise, I'm liking it! Good job!