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this fic is AWESOME! the storyline is brilliant and very realistic..! update a.s.a.p!

This story has left me extremely impressed. I like the way you have stayed mostly true to who the characters are while making them entirely your own. And I love the fact that you've shown a much darker and emotional side to Severus, and that you've made it seem natural for him to be like this.

I can't wait for the next chapter! Hope to see it soon.

Very good!!! That chapter was really a turning point in this story!!! I think hermione should realize who the man she has married really is! Even if he seems to be sorry and lost, she should get the hell away from him! He seems crazy and mentaly ill. Someone who does the things snape has done and enjoyed it can not switch to a normal life. Well, I

Wow. That was a very intense chapter. I imagine writing it was really draining. It was very well written, though. I hope these two can make a connection now and come together honestly as a couple. Hope to see an update soon! Tengo que irme! Salud!
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Killer K

The last chapter was rather disturbing... but I think it communicated what you wanted it to. I have enjoyed your tale so far and look foward to the next update. Thank you for writing

"Voldemort liked to be dominated." LMFAO!! That is so very plausible too! Excellent chapter. :P

i cant wait to find out what happens next. i just love the way you write, and how u keep the character in character. you dont make severus overly soft or hard, just right...

man ... i hope they can find a why to fix this .. and will sev tell her what the dark lord wants him to do .. please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please update soon i would love to read more ... later for now

angel

Non-consentual sex and RAPE are not the same! You need to change the warning on this chapter!

Ohh dear. This chappie is so sad and full of pain. You can almsot feel the tangible emotions. well done. I really felt for Hermione and Severus. and just let me say ewww Severus needs double cleansing spells and a good scrub down after being with Voldermort. Go figure though he'd use Severus. I hope Hermione can be strong enough for the both of them and help turn Severus around better than she has been. You can see the small changes but still after what he did it will be hard to regain anything they have. However I am willing to bet Hermione's love will see them through cause Love conquers all. Awesome story and chappie. More more more please. Update again soon please.