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for The Morning After

by Queeny

schedule January 30, 2008 at 12:00 AM
great job i cant wait for the next update
schedule January 30, 2008 at 12:00 AM
i love brooding Severus. And I love the story so far. Please update soon.
schedule January 30, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Yay and update! Can't wait for more!
schedule January 28, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Wonderful, wonderful story so far! Keep up the good work and update sooN!!!!
Sarah
schedule January 24, 2008 at 12:00 AM
please update i love your story
person Anon
schedule January 20, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
schedule January 19, 2008 at 12:00 AM
i am really enjoying this story!!! i cant wait to see what will happen!
* >< joy*
person genna
schedule January 18, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I read your collaboration with Ms. Figg. I sought out one of your other stories to see what you would come up with on your own.

This is so original. Of course, I cringed when I saw that Hermione was still in school and under 18 when she took up with Snape. Once I tried to get pass the age squicky feeling, I noticed how complex both figures are. You successfully managed to point most of my attention on Snape and Hermione without the aggravation I normally feel when the author doesn't give me enough details about the rest of HP crew. Those characters are still there just doing their own thing.

I thoroughly enjoyed this story. I hope there is more, but if you feel like you have done all you could do with it. I understand.

Keep writing, Queen.
schedule January 17, 2008 at 12:00 AM
First of all i love this story! It's so interesting and the way you write the charecters is very enjoyable. Secondly... string that beetle bit** up!! she's just jelous because she doesnt have a deatheater of her own!! lol sorry, couldn't keep that inside. ut like i said excelent story, keep up the great work.
person Tenar10r
schedule January 17, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Oooo that Rita is wicked! Hemione needs a can of Raid!