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July 25, 2006 at 12:00 AM
great chapter! :D thanks for the back story on the parasite I was wondering what was going to happen with that :D
I love how they now feel open enough to show their love for each other and lust without using the tattoo and how he just snogged her in the middle of the school :D
I love how they now feel open enough to show their love for each other and lust without using the tattoo and how he just snogged her in the middle of the school :D
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July 25, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Very good story so far, I like that he is beginning to loosen up towards Hermione a bit. Also what did happen with the parasite? Thank you!!
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July 24, 2006 at 12:00 AM
wow tah was a great chapter .. im gald he change the rules some.. please please please update soon i would love to read more .. later for now
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July 24, 2006 at 12:00 AM
ohhh I liked this chapter.. he finally showed her how much he loves her hehe and ron pfft he is a prat! :D more more! :)
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July 23, 2006 at 12:00 AM
man .... that was a great chapter .. please please please update soon i would love to read more ... later for now
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July 23, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Phew...gonna have to turn the A/C now. Excellent chapter...keep up the good work!
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July 23, 2006 at 12:00 AM
that chaapter was really good!! :D and hot too!~ lol I love how deviant he is but not in a completely sicko way, he just shackles her to the wall and takes her *giggles* oh I hope that she falls in love with him soon :D
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July 23, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I just wanted to say that I thought Contracts was a very good story as well, and was very disappointed that it was seemingly abandoned. Thank you for continuing it. What you've written is very similar to what I pictured it continuing on to in my head. Wonderful story so far, please continue!!
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July 23, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
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July 23, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Another great chapter!
One Question - It was unclear, however, just how Hermione was able to breastfeed a baby - In this story, is she always lactating, or did did one of them cast the spell that allows her to expell milk? It was probably handy for her to have learned it, I suppose.
Also, did you consider putting Hermione's reaction (pain, humiliation, something else) in the story? Has she gotten used to this sort of treatment? That would be cool character info. It might make the scene more real.
Again, great work. Keep updating.
One Question - It was unclear, however, just how Hermione was able to breastfeed a baby - In this story, is she always lactating, or did did one of them cast the spell that allows her to expell milk? It was probably handy for her to have learned it, I suppose.
Also, did you consider putting Hermione's reaction (pain, humiliation, something else) in the story? Has she gotten used to this sort of treatment? That would be cool character info. It might make the scene more real.
Again, great work. Keep updating.