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for Bloodbound

by writtenwithapensealedwithakiss

person Anon
schedule August 1, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I hope Snape soon realises that causing someone pain will only create fear and not respect... it never does. (unless you're into spanking of course ;-) but this was way beyond consensual play)

I do love this story! Update!
person Megan Consoer
schedule August 1, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
person pinkwands
schedule August 1, 2006 at 12:00 AM
ohh that nasty brown cow! she needs to be put in the chair not HG! I am glad that DD is stepping in the poor love being beaten :( great chapter! I can't wait to find out Sevs reaction!
person pinkwands
schedule July 30, 2006 at 12:00 AM
great chapter!!! :) I love how you are showing the dynamics within the couple and I love ron the prat hehehe
person Miroku75
schedule July 29, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Sweet update.
person angel
schedule July 29, 2006 at 12:00 AM
man ron you are stuipd... in glad sev told him off and the told each other that they love each other ... please please please update soon i would love to read more .. later for now

angel
person Citten
schedule July 29, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Yet another great chapter only one thing...could you for the flashbacks seperate them better with like stars or italics or line or something cause i seem to get a little lost. Thanks and cant wait to read more!!
person Citten
schedule July 29, 2006 at 12:00 AM
how cute! WRITE MORE, WRITE MORE!!! please!!!(said hopfully :))
person Megan Consoer
schedule July 28, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
schedule July 28, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Once again a simply marvolous chapter!! Thank You! Can't wait for more!