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I am very happy to see this story continue....Contracts had ended so strangely....Keep Going!!!

First..Thank you for loving Contracts as much as I do and side note does anyone know what happened to laceyweasley Second...I am way excited to read the storys varilation that you have created and am dying to read it Third...ON WITH THE STORY!!!!!!!!!!

i am happy someone took up the story. contract was one of my favs, because it had a totally different plot. but you do rushz a bit. try to put in more dialog, scenery... it will make it smoother. bye

Thank You! Thank You! Thank You! I am so happy someone picked up that story idea. I was sorry that the story line was not completed. IT IS A VERY INTERESTING TAKE on the whole Snape/Granger ship. Please do WHATEVER you need to see it through to the end.

Thank you for your clear and concise author's note. I got flack (via e-mail) from another author whom I criticized for not clarifying the circumstances under which she took over a story. Since you are writing an original piece, using the background and characters created by another author, I cannot see why she/he, could not be ought but flattered.

Creative criticism - Try making your paragraphs shorter and double space your dialogue. Whe reading online, it makes it easier.

Nice start.

I enjoyed the first two chapters but I am a little confused over all the children, where did they come from? does he have four children and who is sarah? :D