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by writtenwithapensealedwithakiss

person Miroku75
schedule July 22, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I eagerly await updates to this story. It is wonderful.

While the flashbacks are good, I think more dialog would be useful. I would love to have heard how Hermione answers the question,
person pinkwands
schedule July 22, 2006 at 12:00 AM
*fans herself* pheeewww baby that was a hot chapter!!! hehe I love the concept of the tattoo and their minds being linked with all the family, I am really enjoying this story after I read the contract ;) update soon please? :)
person Anon
schedule July 21, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Hmmm I think I smell a lemon orchard coming up. Great work...keep it going!!!
person Anon
schedule July 21, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I read Contracts and am happy someone is continuing it.
What happened with the parasite; could you write more about that?
And I do wonder where baby Sarah is, as she had bonded with Hermione and Hermione was nursing her. Is she at Hogwarts too?

Keep writing!
person angel
schedule July 21, 2006 at 12:00 AM
wow that was wow .. please please please please update soon i would love to read more .. later for now

angel
person lovethelab
schedule July 21, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I too loved "contract" and I have enjoyed your first two chapters! I can not wait for an update!
person angel
schedule July 20, 2006 at 12:00 AM
wow... please please please pleas update soon i would love to read more .. later for now

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person L'Vanna
schedule July 20, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I tried to email Lacey but it was kickedback to me, she seems to have dropped off the face of the www. I will definitely be reading this if you would like a beta for this story let me know, I'd be glad to help you out.

person Miroku75
schedule July 20, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I was a great fan of 'Contracts' and am glad to see it continuted. I can't wait to see future chapters.
person septentrion
schedule July 20, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I've read contracts to have some bzckground and it's a pity that story remains unfinished. It's good someone has taken over the task to continue it, however I feel like you've rushed the plot compared to the original story. It must be because I didn't expect the husband's name before at least 5 or 6 chapters. I'm know waiting for the following chapters to see where you're leading us.