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for Bloodbound

by writtenwithapensealedwithakiss

schedule February 8, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I really hate to say it because I love SS,l but she should have told him to stick it and left much sooner. Hopefully he will be the jerk he was busy turning back into for he to see so that she will realize that he will not get over his feelings of superiority just because he is shocked for awhile over his bad behavior...espicially when he just gets away with it. There was no consequence and he really deserved for there to be some. Whether he "loves" HG or not, she deserves better treatment from him and the sooner he learns that, the better for him also. p
schedule February 8, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Yay! Sanity won out and SS is back to being his decent self. Realizing he may lose her might just have helped and wouldn't that really tick off his father? p
person Anon
schedule August 11, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
person dinkyjew
schedule August 11, 2008 at 12:00 AM
i really liked the story but was curious to know who side was snape on in contracts it was not made clear and now in your story it was never said either. I was just curious I know you wrote this a while back but if you were inclined to write more chapters i would love to read them. any way thanks for the read I passed it on to a couple of friends they will love it i'm sure

schedule September 20, 2007 at 12:00 AM
dear takemeaway, I think your story is lovely. Great that you found the courage to move on where cotracts left off, though I can
person Anon
schedule December 4, 2006 at 12:00 AM
i am so pleased that you took up were "contracts" left off. You are doing an excellent job!
schedule November 28, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Ccino, you may send them if you like, and I can look over them. I can't promise anything, but I will see what I can do! :) my email is violet_snape@yahoo.com
schedule November 28, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Oh, BTW, you will have to Cut and Paste if you use Microsoft Word, because I only have Works Word Processor
person ccino
schedule November 26, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Wow, am I glad you took up this story. I have dozens of unfinished f/f's. You have done a smashing job of this one. Maybe I could send you a few(ahem:Hundred) more and you can finish them too. Let me know if you are willing. Not many could do so well I am sure. I definately could'nt.

ccino
person Citten
schedule October 31, 2006 at 12:00 AM
great ended way too soon and way, way too fast!! thank you for your time on this story and i do wish you would consider revising the last chapter at least and make it long but if not c'est la vive!