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for Falling In

by Gothic

person Kris
schedule October 23, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Oh snap. O.o
person anya
schedule October 23, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I love cliches, and this fic!
person Danielle
schedule September 7, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Just to repeat everyone else, this story is awesome and I can't wait for another chapter! Waiting as patiently as possible (read: please please please update you're killing me here) :-)
person Darque Hart
schedule August 30, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I'm sure others have already told you ... this is a great story. I was reading it at another website, but you're ahead with posting here;)

The use of the diaries is a fascinating way of giving all the backstory. Usually a lot of bouncing back and forth between this time and that which was, can be confusing. But this work extremely well.

So, I'm sitting on the edge of my seat waiting for the next bit... come on .... any time now .... hurry up!
person m. majere
schedule August 27, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I am incredibly hooked on this story. Your writing is a skillful mixture of almost detached observation, understatement, innuendo, mystery, and romance. The structure of the story is wonderful! Your portrayal of the Professor remains totally within character. I am curious to see where this goes, as are we all.
person Khaleda
schedule August 21, 2006 at 12:00 AM
My my, someones gotten herself into quite the bind, eh? I can safely say that you have my full attention, and I will patiently wait however long it takes to find out what happen next. But, do hurry...

As meantioned before, wonderful job on Snape's diary entries. I can picture him bent over his desk writing the bloody things. Brilliant, friend. Brilliant.

~Khaleda
person melissaIvory
schedule August 21, 2006 at 12:00 AM
oh, oh, oh, oh! i cannot wait for the next chapter...
person MagicalAbgelForever
schedule August 20, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Once again, billiant!! I love this story a lot. I'm very curious to know what will happen between Hermione and Severus later on. Update soon!!!
person MagicalAngelForever
schedule August 20, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Once again, billiant!! I love this story a lot. I'm very curious to know what will happen between Hermione and Severus later on. Update soon!!!
person Queen Celestia
schedule August 20, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Aww I wanted Hermione's kid to be her's and Severus' illegitimate love child!
Not Harry's nasty spawn.
ERM. I mean.. >.>