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for Falling In

by Gothic

person m. majere
schedule October 31, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Wow! Always keeping us in suspense. Great and original writing style.
person LVanna
schedule October 31, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I've c&p'd this chapter as it's easier for me to read offline. But after having read your A/N just had to say this...You NEED to send your BETA at least a Dozen Red Roses and a box of Godiva Chocolates, 12000 words beta'd in a day!? The woman is a Goddess among betas! The thought of betaing a chapter that large in a day gives me the shakes.


Now I shall go read the chapter. (be back later to leave a review for the author)
person FLBanshee
schedule October 31, 2006 at 12:00 AM
First, excellant choice on the Evanescense song. I recently purchase that CD and as soon as I heard that song, I knew it was destined for a HG/SS fic. I'm really loving the story and anxious for the next update.
person LVanna
schedule October 31, 2006 at 12:00 AM
WOW...that was an amazing chapter. Very powerful. I could relate to Narcissa having been in an abusive marriage for 15 long yrs myself. (Yes, I did rescue myself finally.) I'm eagerly awaiting the next update and keeping my fingers crossed for a happy ending.
person dd
schedule October 24, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I'm so glad that you have revived this story, its wonderful. Can't wait to read more!
schedule October 24, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Oh dear god woman. I am utterly gripped. I haven't enjoyed reading a fanfic this much in such a long time. I only just found it today and have sat and read it all in one sitting (7 lengthy chapters). I love the characters, the plot, your writing is fantastic. I love the little snippets of music to accompany each chapter too (we appear to have very similar taste!)

Sometimes there are things that bother me about a given fanfic enough to make me drop a story (Americanisms are my pet peeve) and I have to admit I was a bit confused by you having Hermione saying she was just turned 18 and saying that Harry was not yet of age (17 in JKR's world) when they are in the same school year. But I got over it, and fudging Draco's birthday didn't bother me, this is way too good to allow myself to get annoyed by such things.

Oh I love it so much. I hope you update soon!
schedule October 24, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Oh yes, and I loved the little reference to a certain horsey designer! Very amusing wig joke! I just went and annoyed my hubby going on and on about this fic with a huge grin on my face, rather excitedly. Thank you for entertaining me so thoroughly. MORE!
person MagicalAngelForever
schedule October 24, 2006 at 12:00 AM
BEST CHAPTER EVER!!!
person Queen Celestia
schedule October 24, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Cliff hanger!
I really liked how you wrote this chapter. Actually the chapter I'm writing for my story is rather abusive, and I'm finding it much harder to write, than I thought it would be, so it gives me greater appreciation for this chapter. :)
person FLBanshee
schedule October 23, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Whoa! Heavy stuff. Get a good night's sleep and update soon!