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for Transference

by shelia

schedule December 16, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Oh, please don't let this one fall off the shelf. I've enjoyed it so much and I've been crossing my fingers that you'll keep this up. Don't let the lack of reviews stop you from writing. It's the nature of this site really, the stories that deserve the most notice don't receive it. Please update.
schedule November 2, 2008 at 12:00 AM
This is amazing. Please update soon!
schedule November 2, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I eagerly await the next chapter. This is the most twisted (and the absolute best) Lucius I've ever read on this site. Not to mention how amazing the entire story is. I get goose bumps just thinking about what will happen next.
schedule November 2, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Er, I know I already reviewed, but I forgot to mention - it seems like your story description might be too long - did the last part of it get cut off on the listings page? Maybe you already knew this, but just giving you the heads up (readers don't have much else to go on in choosing a fic).
schedule November 1, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Ooh, this is so good, I'll be watching for every update . . . I like that Hermione has a real spine here and is an independent woman. A lot of HG/LM fics have her being such a wet blanket, and I hate that! They seem to be evenly matched here, and I'm enjoying their interaction. Thanks for sharing!
person Ithilwen
schedule November 1, 2008 at 12:00 AM
This is a very interesting story.. I see it's been recently updated, and I hope it will continue like that!

it's very intriguing.. Will she go to him for her answers?? And will he be able to heal thos wounds that are just beneath the surface? And not covered and forgotten as she thought?
schedule November 1, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Grief, self-punishment, suicidal behaviors and fantasies, survivor's guilt, anger, rage. Painful and detailed, but I like it. Your characterizations are detailed and mature, I hope you continue to write this.
person Anon
schedule July 1, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
person skye
schedule November 26, 2006 at 12:00 AM
yee gads... the Mnt. Everest of Cliffies!!!!! I do hope Malfoy gets a lovely little parol officer! pweeeese don't abandon this
schedule September 18, 2006 at 12:00 AM
When I first read the title, I thought this story would be boring. But then I started to actually read it and I can't stop praising it. At times it reminds me a bit of "Silence of the Lambs", only that Lucius is way smoother and more impressing than Hannibal Lector which is a wonder cuz I didn't expect anyone to be bigger than Lector. Lucius didn't lose his sarcastic humor, and I think you do one of the best Lucius portraits that this site has ever seen. Very, very impressing. Plus great style. :)