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by RDWind

person Dorian
schedule January 12, 2007 at 12:00 AM
This is so confusing.. not bad, though.
person andy
schedule August 12, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Pretty good if a bit short. I like the premise.
person Luthien
schedule August 6, 2006 at 12:00 AM
That's scary! I have a friend living in New Mexico whose car was hit by a truck and he was in a coma a long time after that. No, he didn't dream about being a wizard, but the situation about the waking-up is just so similar to what you've written...
By the way, my dad is certain that at the end of the Harry-Potter-series, things will turn out to reveal that Harry has just dreamed all the time and adventures at Hogwarts. I hope not... seems so dissatisfying! Nevertheless, I like your plot... keep writing, it's really good!
person hpf2114
schedule August 6, 2006 at 12:00 AM
very original, very different, very cool.
person deamonxanth
schedule July 25, 2006 at 12:00 AM
This was very differnt. It was good. but i didn't like it. There has been alot of talk about rowlings book ending in a similar manner, with it all being just a dream. If this happens i'll never read another book by her. I just HATE that thought. But your story was really good. Very clever.
person me
schedule July 18, 2006 at 12:00 AM
That's a bit different. Not in a bad way. Just different

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