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March 31, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I don't mean to sound to critical, but it was really hard to read since it didn't have almost any spacing. I know i am probably one of the few people that read Lemons and hope for a plot. I had trouble getting into the story, because I keep having to ask why things were happening. I got to say you have a vivid imagination.
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August 6, 2007 at 12:00 AM
nice story..when will be the next update?
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November 6, 2006 at 12:00 AM
The story's too cliche..
There are tons of errors..
And for the LOVE of god, why would Harry be having muscles like hell..
Quidditch does not build muscles in that way... Do you know anything about training?
Geeeez..
There are tons of errors..
And for the LOVE of god, why would Harry be having muscles like hell..
Quidditch does not build muscles in that way... Do you know anything about training?
Geeeez..
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September 30, 2006 at 12:00 AM
The fic is good but I think you should let double space...it's better to read.
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September 18, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I LOVE THIS STORY!
PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE CONTINUE!
I can't wait to see what happends next!
PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE CONTINUE!
I can't wait to see what happends next!
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September 18, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Also can you make paragraphs and leave spaces when they talk and don't forget capital letters and basic puntuation, that way I wouldn't get lost when I'm reading because the story would be spaced out.
And if you do that the story will look longer!
Love TiffANY!
And if you do that the story will look longer!
Love TiffANY!
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September 13, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Is that really the way u thought they'd get together? Gimme a break.
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August 15, 2006 at 12:00 AM
this story is amazing please update it FAST!
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August 13, 2006 at 12:00 AM
very, very, very, good story.
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August 12, 2006 at 12:00 AM
This is a decent story I like it