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for Occlumency at Grimmauld Place

by PensievePerson

person mack
schedule March 30, 2015 at 12:00 AM
please add new chapter soon
person Blue
schedule March 12, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Very nice, can't wait to see what happens next!
schedule January 17, 2011 at 12:00 AM
wow, really cool.
person mister mister
schedule April 5, 2010 at 12:00 AM
mmm i can't wait for more....i hope sirius becomes domineering....more detail would be nice too!!
schedule July 29, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I have been rather getting a kick out of all this controversy in the reviews (on another site ff.net).
LOL. I am currently formulating a new chapter for this story. Harry will be
getting some justice for all this abuse. I also realized I called the story
"Occlumency at Grimmauld Place" and then I realized I didn't finish it. It
does not have a plot, but don't worry fans! I plan to patch things up a bit. Don't
expect everyone to be in character, just because I'm adding more of a plot though. It might not be PWP once I'm done. As always, if you read, please review.
schedule January 29, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Thank-you for your review anonymous person above! I also changed it from 'fanny' to 'rump'. I'm glad you liked it...not my prize intellectual fan-fic o be honest, but still enjoyable. Plese read my other much better stories on here.

person it
schedule January 28, 2008 at 12:00 AM
i love it n.n

but, just to let you know... in britain, the word 'fanny' refers to a lady's most private place o.o; you might want to reword it in chapter three lol

xxx
schedule January 4, 2008 at 12:00 AM
please somebody review...and tell me if I should label this PWP or not.
schedule October 3, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I really want to read more.
Please keep writing.

Can you email me when you update?
person Anon
schedule July 19, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Glad you didn't decide to kill Sirus. So, did Snape notice harry starting to get hard?