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for A Mess to be Made

by roxierose13

person Blissful Spirit
schedule September 4, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I absobloodylutely loved it! This is one of the first Tom/Dan ones that i have read, cuz i don't read many stories with the actual actors, but i just love your story! *goes off to read sequel*
person Shardae
schedule August 26, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Dang I guess they should thank their fan, cuz she made them see what they really wanted...
schedule August 14, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I just have say... BRAVO! That was awesome! Now I'm gonna go read the sequel!
person Katie
schedule August 13, 2006 at 12:00 AM
loved it!
person Incessant_Darkness
schedule August 12, 2006 at 12:00 AM
At first I was thinking this isn't one of your better ones and then I'm like well I'll have to read the entire thing before Ijudge right. And when I was done I realized what had happened. You have doomed me for life you know that. I'm going to be sitting in a dark theatre watching OotP and some time in the middle when Draco gives Harry an odd look I'll end up yelling something along the lines of 'Damn straight Felton, you know you wanna shag that sexy peice of Dan meat.' and all my friends will look at me weird. Gods do you under stand what you have done. And to that degree I congradulate [sp?] you because it was very well done. and ignore the people who are against self insertion, they do it in their minds and you put on paper [well MS wrod proabably but whose asking]. Neways the conclusion: good job as always. I'll go read the sequel when I'm in need of a good laugh. keep the fics coming.
person Little Fly
schedule August 9, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Ooooh! That was great. I liked it so much. Please, please do the sequel. And update soon! Please!
person emo rainbows
schedule August 8, 2006 at 12:00 AM
omg that was soooo cute ^^ can you add onto it?" i loved it sooo much good job its very unique i lvoed it soo muuch
person SEQUEL!? *squeal*
schedule August 3, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I. LOVED. THAT!!!!!!!!!!! I've reviewed before as well but i just love this, the wya you've done it, the new perspective,....such a cute coupling! hehehehe.....seeeeeequeeeeel! *squeal....swoon, faint*
person Anon
schedule August 2, 2006 at 12:00 AM
This should prolly be moved to the actors catagory when it is up and running again.
-Megan
person Jiall
schedule August 2, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I now have to hide for the next hour waiting for this stupid grin to disappear. If someone were to see me with it on I would have to tell them what I just read and there would be many questions involved. There isn't much RPS in this part of the website and I was wondering the other day when I would see some. I'm begining to think about setting up shop as a psychic. I'm not too keen on the self insertion, but understand why it's necessary for the story. You seem to be having far too much fun with it. I don't really blame you in the least. Oh, and as for the final line, it's a good thing you have a sequel planned. Otherwise there would be demands for one.