rate_review Reviews

I liked this fic, but just a general tip: You might want to read over it again to catch some of your mistakes. For example, review your french, most of it was all wonky. Also, make sure that when you have a new character speaking, to indent. Check to make sure that you capatilize the first word in your quotations. These are all things that if you were to copy and paste into any typing program, it would most likely catch for you, and will make the story more easily follow-able for the reader. Other than that, you have a great idea for a story, and I love Blaze, so keep up the good work!
-Rose

hey, great story, but quick spell-check, its "des beaux yeux", not de, and since ginnys a girl, its ma cherie, not mon cher, other than that, fantastic

or u can also use ma ch

hello just to say that I like your fic and that for the translationsare:Qui mon cher, et vous avez de beaux yeux"c'est plut

I think u have a great story going! The coupling is kinda weird, but it is a great story nonetheless. I have wondered about Blaise, cuz most stories just mention him, no1 has written a story about him. So thanx, update soon!!
JA'NE,
Ceres Aoyama

thats exactly what i think he should look like, not some scrawny little black boy cause thats how hes portrayed in the books/movies.

blaise is awesome and sexy