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for long desire

by angelsofdeath

person punkin02
schedule October 8, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I thought it was great :) Good Job!
person vibora
schedule October 5, 2006 at 12:00 AM
it is up to standards! ^_^ it was very good!
person Amessis
schedule October 5, 2006 at 12:00 AM
That was nice! Well done.
person emma
schedule July 22, 2006 at 12:00 AM
i loved it! and i really think you should continue with more chapters :]]
great job and good luck :D
person avihenda
schedule July 18, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I liked it :-) hope you post more fics.
person Mena
schedule July 17, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Alright, so I usually dispise D/H pairings to no end, but I really was intrigued by the way you write. I will definatly read more if you keep writing. Your an amazing writer. Keep it up. =]
person L_C
schedule July 17, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Aw i really enjoyed this fic! Im not great at reviews I never know what to say lol! I found this fic sweet yet not at the same time.... Ill keep look out for more of your fics

L_C x
person RentaiKitten
schedule July 17, 2006 at 12:00 AM
pretty good! Nice build up of tension, ending open enough for more chapters or sequels. Mouth watering sex - looking forward to future updates!