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by calmchick

person Shardae
schedule August 2, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I hope Harrry thinks of a good plan to air out Hermonie's durtty little sercet...
person Lina
schedule August 1, 2006 at 12:00 AM
OOOO!!! No don't let Crouch get killed, if anything let Hermoine get hurt!!!!!!
person Lina
schedule August 1, 2006 at 12:00 AM
AAAAHHHHH!!! What will Harry do with that devious mind of his??? Hmm??
person Arashi_Tuo
schedule August 1, 2006 at 12:00 AM
ooooo! cliff hanger, i hope harry tells nev about that evil slag! i think this storys awsome Keep it up! and please write more!
person ren
schedule July 31, 2006 at 12:00 AM
ohh the suspense please continue writing, you know i never suspected hermione to turn evil, but i like the effect in this story i would like to know more, please continue writing
person Shardae
schedule July 31, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I wonder if Harry's goin to say any thing to Neville. I think Neville has the right to know the truth.....
person Shardae
schedule July 30, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Who is Neville gonna tell that lives in the Dungeon?
person Shardae
schedule July 29, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Hermonie was what?????
person Shardae
schedule July 28, 2006 at 12:00 AM
What??? So both Hermoine and Neville are pregnat? I wonder if he's gonna find out that she aint carrying his baby... It would be funny if her baby came out with red hair...
person ren
schedule July 28, 2006 at 12:00 AM
ohh keep writing please