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August 29, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Its actually good enough to make me almost forget that Nev thinks he is making out with Moody and likes it. So off I go to read the rest and try to erase once more the pic of Nev and Moody and replace it with Barty Jr and Nev.
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August 29, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Let me be honest everything is wrong with this story except the plot. From the grammar to the setting is screwed up. Even worse on the grammar you need to get a beta. But Sirius shouldn't be dead yet cuz they are just now starting their 5th year and if he died in some other way you should have explained that. But I think these are mistakes that can be fixed by a beta (which you need badly!!!!!!). *cough* Well other than that its actually good enough that I can ignore those things and continue reading.
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August 19, 2006 at 12:00 AM
IF YOU DON'T DO A SEQUEL I WILL BE FLAMING MAD!!!! WE HAVE TO IFND OUT IF THEY ET BACK TOGETHER!!!! PLEASE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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August 19, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I am so mad at you right now. I loved this story and I can't believe it ended. You have to no you must write a sequel. I want Barty and Neville together so bad. Please Please write a sequel. I love this story.
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August 17, 2006 at 12:00 AM
FINALLY!!!! I'VE BEEN WAITING!!!
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August 15, 2006 at 12:00 AM
UGH!!!! Doesn't Crouch know that he is going to LOSE NEVILLE!!!!
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August 14, 2006 at 12:00 AM
You REALLY need to get a beta.
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August 12, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Yes, you're back!!!! I NEED MORE!!!
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August 11, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Shot I hope Barty gets away and kills both Hermonie and Voldemont...
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August 10, 2006 at 12:00 AM
HEY!!!! YOU HAVE NOT UPDATED!!! WHY???