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Good chapter. Though I am wondering how the vampires keep themselves fed, if they rarely go to the surface? And why live underground if only fledglings are hurt by the sun? I like the way you've made Harry smart. His plan is great.

good chapter. Poor harry.

That one is one great story.
Don't know why I am the only one to review till this time.
Interesting plot, fabulous describtiones and a Severus that just calls out to be devoured. One story I haven't read thousend of versions off.

Keep up the great work ... hope to read more soon.

PS: Do excuse me spelling, it's way to early in the morning to be coherent.

Ohhhhhhhhhhh... I like this a lot. I wasn't going to read it at first, but I'm SO glad that I did. Please hurry up and post the final section of this lovely ficcy, I am in desperate need to read what happens!! ^__^ Very good workies!!

I love your story so far. In fact, there's only one part that didn't fit.

He threw back his head and moaned; the sensation of his blood coursing through him almost too much for his pleasure nerves to handle (I would just say senses, or just nerves, as there are no nerves that only feel pleasure) (we need to work on this one; not sure exactly what