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by mylovesagar

person Shardae
schedule July 28, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I cant wait to see wht happens next...
person Nita
schedule July 28, 2006 at 12:00 AM
GREAT!!!...so want more!!...im realy liking this fic...and i think u should like update really really fast...anywayz have fun writin
-Nita
person Jami
schedule July 27, 2006 at 12:00 AM
UPDATE!!! PLEASE!!! i love the story so far!
person Christie
schedule July 27, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I really like your story so far.. I wasn't sure where it was headed, but I love stories with H/L/S! I don't really care who is first, although it just seems like the type of thing that Lucius would prefer. Snape strikes me as being slightly more patient. However, I was wondering if maybe while this is happening Harry could be using his other lover as a pillow. I don't know.. it just seems so much more intimate than the third party just watching. (Not that watching's bad, it just it's his first time! Plus, there's the added comfort level.)
person Storm
schedule July 27, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Yes I think that Lucius should be the first. It makes logical sense as the first time can be emotional and Lucius was said to be his emotional grounder. Good idea. Can't wait for more. Good job!
person missianne
schedule July 27, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I love this. To be perfectly honest, in my opinion Snape would be better because Harry has a slightly better relationship with him. There'd be more of a trust thing there-he's only met Lucius like twice or three times, but Snape's saved his life. Just my opinion, not that it matters. Please update soon, I can't wait to read more of this fic!
person ocelot12
schedule July 27, 2006 at 12:00 AM
So beyond perfect
person jet
schedule July 26, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I love the story. Can't wait for more. I would do severus as harry's first only because you stated he trust him more.......Jet
person volume
schedule July 26, 2006 at 12:00 AM
cute

more please
person I' me For A Reason
schedule July 25, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Well I'm loving the story and if your worried about spelling don't I'm dbad at spelling too
you is pretty good please please please please UPDATE soon

Thanks!!!!!!!!!!


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