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August 25, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I'm intriuged.
I enjoyed the first chapter, though many people might be turned off by the poem type writing, you might want to include a note at the beginning stating that hte entire story will not be written in that format.
I enjoyed the first chapter, though many people might be turned off by the poem type writing, you might want to include a note at the beginning stating that hte entire story will not be written in that format.
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August 23, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I definitely think that you should update this soon. Please notify me when you do.
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August 7, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Good start, good use of simile, needs conclusion! nice parallel between Harry and Professor Snape's daughter.