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July 16, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Oh, I love!! I never thought this is where it would go, with the letters and all. I'm thoroughly enjoying this and I can't wait to see what happens when they meet face to face on the train or at the school. Sparks shall fly! I want to compliment you on your style of writing and how you use the characters. The way you write makes everything flow. Everything has a place and makes it easy to read. It isn't repetitive and has the right word variety. I also like how you've decided to display all your characters, especially Harry. Far too many times have I seen him simply give in. In this, it seems like he's got some fight in him before it all crashes in on Draco and he. If you are still looking for a beta, I would love to help. I don't promise perfect skills but I do right by myself and my english teachers ^.^ (though.. those coma's can be ebil!) *gives cookies*
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July 16, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I'd beta for you, if you'd like. Great story, I really enjoy the back and forth banter!
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July 16, 2006 at 12:00 AM
More! More! Just what is that naughty Harry up to? Hmmmm....
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July 15, 2006 at 12:00 AM
*dies of laughter* I'm sure Mil would love Ron's comment on the letter. I don't like her or Pansy so found it extremely funny. I could see her now trying to write something like that and... It just doesn't seem possible. Anywho, it was great and I laughed my ass off. I'll be waiting for the next chapter with little patience. I'll be bouncing in my computer chair until you update. *glomps*
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July 15, 2006 at 12:00 AM
XD!!! Love it and can't wait for more. Please write more. I just might die if you don't.
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July 15, 2006 at 12:00 AM
*grins* It's hella funny on the last bit. I could see Ron's look of horror in my mind at the thought of it being 'The Troll of Slytherin'. Please continue.
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July 15, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I like this is going and I like to read more. Now that you got this review, please update. Thanks. DN.
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July 15, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Awesome story. I like how he doesn't know who sent the letter. =)
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July 15, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Please another chap. please. *pouts with tears in her eyes* pleeeeeeeeeeeaaaaaaaaaaasssssssssssssseeeeeeeeeeeeeee!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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July 15, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Wow. This is really good. I just read it all, and I seriously can't wait for more. I like it.