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for Hermione's Detour

by lpicw

person Chelsea
schedule August 9, 2006 at 12:00 AM
omg!!! you have got to update! please dont abandon this story i absolutely love it!!
person Anon
schedule August 7, 2006 at 12:00 AM
way to good and way to short!!
person Stratyllis
schedule August 7, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I think you posted this fic in the wrong place. This is the Hermione/Draco section, not the Hermione/house elf section.
person Tabitha
schedule August 7, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Still really good but not long enough haha. I'd like to see more of Draco though!
person Dylan
schedule August 7, 2006 at 12:00 AM
When's Draco coming back?
So far this could be classed as Hr/beast! Ha ha.
Tippy certainly seems to get around Hermione more than Draco.

Still loving it though, in a perverted way!
person Crow
schedule August 7, 2006 at 12:00 AM
You've changed my whole perspective on S&M.
Thank you.
person Anon
schedule August 7, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I can't wait to fingout whats in store for her! I just love this kind of stuff! More sex please!! Keep me up to date please:)
person Tabitha
schedule August 6, 2006 at 12:00 AM
This is hottttt.....I LOVE IT. Please update again soon????? Maybe email me when you do???
person Stratyllis
schedule August 5, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I like the story and it's hot and well written. The house elf's actions seem overly harsh and cold somehow. I think that the same actions by Draco would just be kinky and sexy, because they can have a connection. That connection isn't there when it's Hermione/elf. I'd reccomend keeping the elf's action in the story to a minimim.
person chaz
schedule August 5, 2006 at 12:00 AM
the story is very interesting but still really good ''so what happens next''!!