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for Hermione's Detour

by lpicw

person Anon
schedule August 16, 2006 at 12:00 AM
You're doing it again. Stop moving it to the top of the list without an update or even an edit. You're doing it to get more reviews. You are a looser.
person hmmm
schedule August 16, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Hmmm, up to the top of te list but no update. I think I'm beginning to see a pattern here and it ain't pretty. So basically your hits should be cut in half.
person Stag
schedule August 15, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Where's Draco??
person ScarlettWynter
schedule August 15, 2006 at 12:00 AM
This story reminds me of the sleeping beauty trilogy; I like it.
person Anon
schedule August 14, 2006 at 12:00 AM
another good chapter. though not long enough.
person Dylan
schedule August 14, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Ch 6 : Not bad, but I would like to see some action, rather than have her just sit in a chair.
That's probably why the chapter is so short!
I hope you're not running out of ideas.
person Anon
schedule August 13, 2006 at 12:00 AM
what's not to love about elf's with nipple clamps? write it your way.
person Anon
schedule August 11, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Why does this story keep getting put at the top of the list without any updates or edits? If you're doing it to get more reviews, that's pathetic.
person morgan
schedule August 11, 2006 at 12:00 AM
love the story. please write more of it want to find out what happens next. like it wanna know what happens next.
person Hmmm
schedule August 11, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Oh, I thought you had updated but I don't see anything new added.