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August 26, 2006 at 12:00 AM
no characterisation, no plot - depraved disgusting pathetic
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August 26, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Dude this is way harsh. Poor Hermione. I really feel bad for her. I hope the poor dear gets a break soon.
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August 24, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Thanks for the explanation of the reason why your story goes to the top of the list. It was a very simple one and made sense. Thank you.
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August 22, 2006 at 12:00 AM
wow this is some freaky shit..i like it though
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August 22, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I understand that you don't have to be every where at once, or doing everything at once. This chapter was excellent! update when you're done with fixing it. ;)
Elbe.
Elbe.
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August 22, 2006 at 12:00 AM
This isn't much of a Hermione/Draco fic is it?
Perhaps you ought to move it to the general section, or bring Draco back pronto!
Perhaps you ought to move it to the general section, or bring Draco back pronto!
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August 21, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I LOVE your fic. It's wonderful
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August 20, 2006 at 12:00 AM
When you make edits like that it's not hard to make an author's note saying so. You could have avoided a lot of the negative reviews that way. You should get a beta reader and post a finalized version of the chapters in the first place.
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August 20, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Don't let these assholes throw you off your game. You have a good plot going. Sit down, think it out, write it. These wankers will read it. As for your writing, discribe your scene,what there wearing or not wearing,placement of hands, sounds there making and how they move to the next scene in as much detail as you can. Don't let the shitheads wear you down. Have fun, and if you piss them off so much the better.
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August 17, 2006 at 12:00 AM
DEPRAVED ENTERTAINMENT is hot.