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September 18, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I personally feel you know little or nothing about BDSM. You seem to be a novice to the lifestyle. You appear to be a Wannabe. However, excluding your lack of knowledge of BDSM training and culture, you story is interesting and could actually have a plot - if you so choose it. I won't actually 'rate' you story, as I think it deserves very few stars and must admit that I would be quite surprised to discover that you are legally permitted to be an author of this site.
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September 18, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I'm really sorry but I have reported this story to the mods. It doesn't belong in this section.
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September 18, 2006 at 12:00 AM
You have the coolest story -- but the length of your chapters are ridiculous. I'll either have to abandon your story or wait until you get the 6,000th one written so it will take more than three minutes to read.
Write the story... and make the chapters long enough to enjoy...
--RD
Write the story... and make the chapters long enough to enjoy...
--RD
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September 17, 2006 at 12:00 AM
more. i want to know what happens. updat please ^_^
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September 16, 2006 at 12:00 AM
This was a good chapter. I was getting a little freaked out about the whole house elf thing. I couldn't wait for Draco to get back. Now I can't wait to find out Hermione's reaction when she wakes back up. I've been following the story since the beginning and have been enjoying it. Keep up the good work.
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September 15, 2006 at 12:00 AM
all this brutality its kinda yuk. maybe put some nice things in it and explain your story better. seems like u are rushing.
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September 11, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Yay! Another update. And you brought Draco back. GUH...I love submisive Hermy. Keep up the good work
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September 11, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Draco's back. Finally!!!!!
Not sure why he chose to reveal his identity though. Perhaps we'll find out later.
Will Hermione start fighting off his advances now she knows?
Not sure why he chose to reveal his identity though. Perhaps we'll find out later.
Will Hermione start fighting off his advances now she knows?
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September 11, 2006 at 12:00 AM
wow, i thought she was smarter then that
i thought it was a bit obvious, lolz
update soon
i thought it was a bit obvious, lolz
update soon
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September 10, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I'm loving it so far. Can't wait to read more.