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October 2, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Ch 12 - is this the end of the story?
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October 2, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Don't like it. Sorry but I'm being honest. You just sort of start out in the middle of something with little introduction to the plot but if you were going fo PWP then you achieved the brass ring.
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September 30, 2006 at 12:00 AM
way to end such a wonderful story in such a horrible way. please, make a new ending
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September 26, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Okay, I understand about the desire to edit. But the I don't have time thing doesn't work. WAIT. Wait until you do have time to post something that you're happy with, and NOT because of the reposts - because you should always post your best work. I would never post before ironing out the kinks in a chapter and doing several edits. Don't always have your work with you? Fine - WAIT until you do. Seriously, just wait. Honestly, the reposts don't bother me personally, but the sloppy writing does. Proofread before you post. What's the point of getting it posted faster if it isn't your best?
Also, is this the end of the story? It was an interesting idea, but there was no continuity. What made Hermione suddenly love Draco? There was no transition, no gradual awakening of feelings, no catalyst, which made it sort of unbelievable. Regardless of whether this is the end or not, if you do write another version - PLEASE consider longer chapters. Some character development, more interaction - just give your characters motivation and substance.
I think you've got a lot of great ideas - just spend a little more time polishing them and you'll be a great writer.
Also, is this the end of the story? It was an interesting idea, but there was no continuity. What made Hermione suddenly love Draco? There was no transition, no gradual awakening of feelings, no catalyst, which made it sort of unbelievable. Regardless of whether this is the end or not, if you do write another version - PLEASE consider longer chapters. Some character development, more interaction - just give your characters motivation and substance.
I think you've got a lot of great ideas - just spend a little more time polishing them and you'll be a great writer.
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September 26, 2006 at 12:00 AM
WOW!!!! i didn't see that coming. WHAT HAPPENS?!?!?!?!
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September 25, 2006 at 12:00 AM
very hot
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September 25, 2006 at 12:00 AM
is this the end? ohh i hope not! :::starts sobbing hysterically::: have draco come back! :: wispers:: please
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September 20, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I like this story,I agree you should make your chapters longer and i'm glad that Draco has returned.Please update soon :-)
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September 20, 2006 at 12:00 AM
what!??!?!.
where is all the good stuff.*frown* i was hoping for a read with 10 (x). *frown again*
i want to know what happens. ^_^
where is all the good stuff.*frown* i was hoping for a read with 10 (x). *frown again*
i want to know what happens. ^_^
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September 18, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Wow, Hermione goes from 0 to having no personality in 60 seconds. You know why this story has a low rating? It's not because someone messed with the ratings, it's because this story blows.