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lolz, wow. how did she end up in this predictament? Update soon.

It was only one chapter and I have only one feeling: gasp, that was hot.

Update!

i love this story !
update soon !

This is really good so far and you should continue it,
but there are alot of grammar mistakes and a few spelling ones too.

You really need to re-read your work because as great
as this story is you need to use the correct tense because sometimes
you write in the present and then it goes straight to the past.

So please check so it makes complete sense!

But other than that I really like this story!

GOOD LUCK WITH THE NEXT CHAPTERS!

love T

I'm most definately looking forward to the next chapter. BTW, my firends were curious if the clit-ball exists?

Wow! what a start. I can't wait to see where this goes. Hope you will update again soon.