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for Hermione's Detour

by lpicw

schedule December 22, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I have a question...CAN YOU WRITE MORE!? I need it. Really I do. You have to write more because I am totally obsessed. UPDATE or MAKE A NEW STORY JUST LIKE THIS ONE!!!
schedule April 17, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Hot. Some grammatical mistakes here and there, but I liked all of the sexy things that Hermione had to do. I can't wait for Draco to return. (I'm assuming that that is her mysterious master) Good Job. :)
person Amy
schedule December 28, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I'm not normally a fan of these types of Dramiones but i liked this one


The end paragraph had me in tears

Well done

xx
schedule October 22, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I don't understand so did Draco torture her, did she create this world or did he really love her?
schedule April 10, 2008 at 12:00 AM
what is the devise?
person Anon
schedule November 22, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
person Anon
schedule October 16, 2007 at 12:00 AM
pooper
person Lolloser
schedule October 11, 2007 at 12:00 AM
This, is without a shadow of doubt, is one of the stupidiest stories I've ever seen. I am not saying it to be mean, either. None of this stuff would work the way you described it.
schedule September 7, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Um....OK! I like BDSM as much as the next girl..but this story was so dispassionate and cruel with no character development so it made the bdsm seem so cheap. It's good you're trying to write about the subject though, just hope you get more into the top's head and bottom's real heart next time you write about this topic.
person Anon
schedule August 4, 2007 at 12:00 AM
This has to be by far the worst D/Hr story I have ever laid eyes on

It sucks!

It is just utter bollocks!

It doesn