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for Mrs.Malfoy

by WitchatHeart77

person angel
schedule July 21, 2006 at 12:00 AM
~lol~ tha was great i loved the the hole red eyes thing .. please please please update soon i would love to read more .. later for now

angel
person Kris
schedule July 21, 2006 at 12:00 AM
ohhh oh ohhh, this seems like its going to be funny and interesting. hahah cant wait for updates!
person OoOojabab
schedule July 21, 2006 at 12:00 AM
loving it. enjoyed the submissive hermione and am really enjoying the new hermione. good job of writing a follow-the-leader plot.
person Anon
schedule July 21, 2006 at 12:00 AM
HEHEHE Lucius getting his just desserts..luv it!
person Anon
schedule July 18, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Very good! I hope you update soon, because I can't wait.
person Queen Celestia
schedule July 14, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Aveda Kadevra! Well that's what I wanted to say to Mr. Malfoy.


Write more! You don't want the readers to always think of Hermione in this miserable state do you?? ;-; *emoes*
person Vampire_Exotica
schedule July 14, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Ah I see dear lucy is being his very bad self. I really must punish him!

Anyway. I just wanted to say VERY GOOD! You may be recieving flames but ignore them my dear wicked witch! You are a fantastic writer and its plain to see if this is a SS/HG then it won't remain LM/HG for long and things will get better.

I do hope they do soon!


So If your a flamer and reading this review, retract your comments quick sharp or you shall feel the heal of my boot in your backside!


Vampire Has Spoken!!!!

and wicked you may add my warnings to flamers in your next chapter if you wish. I could do with some fresh game to hunt.

person angel
schedule July 13, 2006 at 12:00 AM
wow .. please please please update soon i would love to read more ... later for now

angel
person MarriedtoaSnapeClone
schedule July 13, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Sorry- but I just don't buy that an intelligent, powerful witch would just meekly go along with such treatment, either by the Ministry of Magic or by a Malfoy. People don't have to just be victims. There are always alternatives- and a woman doeasn't have to wait for a man to rescue her (which is where I presume this is going).
schedule July 13, 2006 at 12:00 AM
OO! Excellent start to the story! I cannot wait for the next chapter, I hope you update quickly. :)