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for Modeling for Crushes

by xXGracefulxFallingXx

person Juana13
schedule April 9, 2009 at 12:00 AM
AW!!!!!!!!!! continue, CONTINUE!!!! i want to see more!
hope you update soon!!!!
person LS
schedule October 17, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Please continue with the story, it's hillarious! It made my day.
person JaNell
schedule July 13, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Well?
...Where the bloody fuck is the next chapter?
person Vibora
schedule July 13, 2006 at 12:00 AM
wooooohoooooo! i love this fic so far! cant wait till everyone sees harrys pictures. draco will go crazy!!! update soon!!! ^_^
person I REALLY NEED AN ACCOUNT
schedule July 13, 2006 at 12:00 AM
OMGOMOMGOMGOMGOMGOMGOMGOMG! PLEASE CONTINUE! YOU'RE REALLY GOOD

But... Though it's really good, there are a lot of grammatical mistakes, but that's nothing a beta can't fix. If you get my meaning. -wink-

I'm offering. But yeah.

Great piece of work you've got here, just work on the grammar and you'll be set.


Update soon!
person Obsidian Phoenix
schedule July 13, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I love it. When can we have the next chapter?
person Anon
schedule July 13, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I absolutly love this story. crossdressing harry is one of my favorites. Its sad that there arent very many of them. Please update this story soon I would love to see at least one of these stories finished.


The Toe
person Anon
schedule July 12, 2006 at 12:00 AM
interesting
person Anon
schedule July 12, 2006 at 12:00 AM
WTF is up with hermione and the food, ever new sentence she has a diffrent item of food. she would be huge if she really did eat like that!
person Anon
schedule July 12, 2006 at 12:00 AM
you need to correct a few things, just check your "was" and "were" other than that is pretty good, if you read over it you will see the spots all you need to do is just watch you tense you fade from past to present, and its hard to follow, and there are some sentances that are missing words, a good read through and you will notice them all.

Will there be more to it?