rate_review Reviews

OMG OMG OMG This is the perfect story I've read so far!!! PLZ keep on writing, I can't wait to see what the rest of the story is like!!! This is really good:D

Ohhh, nice. Haven't read any Death Eater centric stories in ages, and this one looks really good so far. I like the way you've characteristed Theo... his internal voice seems really strong.
Or something :)
Looking forward to the next chap!

Keep going I love it!! It is just unlike anything I have read!! I hope you will continue!!!

Brilliant chapter luv. I found Theo's little inner dialouge about the 'bloody mess' a right hillarious interjection in the middle of all the action. Nice character development, and a particularly well paced, exciting fight scene. Well done! I can't wait for the next chapter.

As always-
Ester

PS- I have to add, I found your description of Draco's, err... *Leadership* capabilities highly entertaining. (grins) The way that you decided each charecter would react under preasure was beautifully planned and personally I think the portraits you paint of each of the boys are pretty darn close to cannon. (As any fan-fic author worth their salt knows, that is an acheivement to be proud of!!)

I'd love to see this piece finished. What a read! Theo is such a terribly under-appreciated charecter in fanfiction, one full of so many interesting possiblilities. Posibilities that you have a marvelous knack for ferreting out, I might add! Please do continue with this, dear!

-Ester

please, keep going